我高二，过几天英语老师让上台自我介绍，这是我的草稿，求大神挑挑错
同学们好，我的英文名字叫托恩。今年我很高兴能和大家一起学习。佛曰，前生五百次回眸才换来今生一次擦肩而过。而我和你们能成为同学说明我们很有缘分。我是个宅男，我很喜欢读历史方面的书，我甚至能抱着一本书安静地看一天。我是个很闷的人，我有很少的朋友，我喜欢活在一个只有我自己的小世界中。很多朋友问我为什么选择人文科目，我通常会说：因为人文科目简单。其实，我想成为一名考古学家。或许几十年后，我将会发觉著名的秦始皇陵墓地宫，为我加油吧！谢谢大家！
Classmates Well, my English name is Torn. This year I am very pleased with everyone to learn. Buddha said, pre-existence five hundred times Looking back only in exchange for this life once a pass by. And I am with you that we can become very fate classmates. I am otaku, I like to read history of the book, I can even hold a book quietly watching one day. I'm a boring person, I have a few friends, I like to live in a just my own little world. Many of my friends asked me why I choose humanities subjects, I usually say: Because the humanities subjects is simple. In fact, I want to become an archaeologist. Perhaps a few years later, I will find the famous tomb of Qin Shi Huang underground palace, filling it for me! Thank you!

同高二看此文章已吐血两百遍。
看来我英语作文扣一般分数很正常

发掘，dig out