北外的童鞋们你们好,帮忙给看看这段话哪里是错的~~~3Q
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  • 这是我自己写的,给看看哪里不对,最好能改改下哈!尽量不要换词,保证没有错误、语句通顺就好,语法错误啊、搭配错误啊、中式啊等等 谢谢啦


    gentlemen ,now it's about time .


    for the love of those people we love ,for the love of ourselves ,put your self together ,be
    brave and strong .this is the least thing we can and must do .


    think about it ,my invincible warriors ---we are here to win use a more prosperous tomorrow .every minute we spend makes a difference .


    so hold your gun firmly and put your finger on that trigger . for the war is just around the corner and we will all be in it ,fighting .


    in the end when the war is over , i know i would cry .


    good night , to all those who are sparing no efforts to get ready for tomorrow .